My fantasy Short story

The Orphan Mushroom

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The Fantasy Land

Once Upon is an orphan named Sarus (Carlos) and her brother Rodrigo(Rodolfo). He goes to the race of the dragon in Yoshi`s city. Rodrigo and Sarus prepare the dragon Spectrum(Jose Roberto) for the race. In the finally time of preparing Sarus saw the tree princess Canella( ?), Salt( AnaP.) and Pepper(Ana M.) instantly the music and race begin Rodrigo say Sarus go!!!!!!! The race stars. And the entire dragon fly the most rapidly can. Spectrum fall when the evil Mauro(Alberto) throw a Bob-omb. In the second turn sarus find an item boxes and a bullet bill. The tree turn was in the send rainbow were Toadus(Diovas) find a boo and past the entire dragon except rainbow peach(Gabriela) that is the dragon of the princess Canella. When the race was in the last turn Spectrum past all. Sarus and it wind the race. And they take the big trophy with 1, 0000 Millions stars (one billions of dollars). The kind potatoes ( Joaquin)was kidnapped by the Faucet ( ?)that also takes the beautiful princess Canella the real love of Sarus .Then Sarus and Rodrigo go to the fairies palaces were the evil faucet of Mauro take the princess and the Kind. When Sarus and Rodrigo was in the palaces he find two fairies called Mary ( Maria )and Tiffa(Tiffany) .

Those two fairies take Sarus and Rodrigo to the palace where they rescue the Kind and the princess .1 years passed and Sarus become the kind and Canella the queen, Rodrigo come the # 1 in the races and he explain how to captures villains , the other princess

Marries with two kinds of the land Far Far Away, Mauro is in the jail with the faucet, and Spectrum the dragon we can said that are lives the good live. 

The end Or NO ?